支招小作文(224) I 动态表五种机动车数量对比

April 24, 2025

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The table shows five types of registered motor vehicle in Australia in 2010 and 2015, with the change of percentage over these five years.

主体段分段：

方法1：按照<时间>分段（本篇文章采取此种分段方法）

方法2：按照<变化幅度>分段

开头段

The table compares the figures for five types of automobiles registered in Australia in 2010 and 2015.

概述段

Overall, the total number of vehiclesincreasedover this period,withlight business vehiclesexperiencing the most dramatic growth. Carsremained the most common vehicle typein both years,whilemotorcycles werethe least popular.

思路要点：

- 整体数量上升

- light business vehicle上涨幅度最大

- cars数量始终最高,motorcycles数值始终最低

Body paragraph 1

In 2010, 3.73 million motor vehicles were registered.Among them, carsdominated the marketwith 1.58 million registrations,followed bytrucks with 1 million registrations and camper vans with 750,000.In contrast, light business vehicleshad the fewest registrations, at just 150,000—100,000fewer thanmotorcycles.

思路要点：2010年

- total：3,730,000

- cars数值最高(1,580,000)，trucks排名第二(1,000,000)，camper vans排名第三(750,000)

- light business vehicles数值最低(150,000)，比motorcycles低100,000

Body paragraph 2

Subsequently, all categorieswitnessed a risein their registrations,bringing the total number of vehicles to5.35 million in 2015, representing a 43% increase.A similar growth rate was observed inthe figure for motorcycles,which reached350,000. Light business vehiclessaw the sharpest rise,tripling to450,000 by 2015.Likewise, car registrationssurgedby 58%,reaching2.5 million during the same period.

思路要点：2015年

- 所有类别数值都上升，total达到5,350,000，上涨了43%

- Motorcycles涨幅类似，达到350,000

- Light business vehicles涨幅最大，2015年上涨了3倍达到450,000

- Cars也急剧上升了58%，达到2,500,000

Body paragraph 3

In comparison,such rapid growth was not exhibited inthe other two vehicles.This was particularly evident incamper vans, whose registrationsincreased by just13%.Similarly, the number of truckssaw a modest climb to1.2 million in 2015, marking a 20% growth.

思路要点：

- 其余两种涨幅较小

- Camper vans仅仅上涨了13%

- Trucks也小幅度上升了20%达到1,200,000