支招小作文(214) I 混合数据图澳洲三年参加休闲活动&男女占比

January 23, 2025

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The bar charts below shows the percentage of males and females enjoying the leisure time from 1996 to 2006, and the percentage of males and females going to different places in 2006.

分段方法：一图一段

Body 1：图1（动态图）

Body 2：图2（静态图）

开头段

The bar charts illustrate changes in the proportions of men and women spending their leisure time between 1996 and 2006, as well as a comparison of their preferences for visiting five different recreational destinations in 2006.

概述段

Overall,the gender gap inleisure time participationhad narrowedbetween 1996 and 2006,witha significant increasein the proportion of women enjoying their leisure time.However, the types of leisure activities preferred by men and womendiffered considerablyin 2006.

思路要点：

- 1996-2006年间，男女差距缩小，其中女生数据显著上升

- 2006年，男女偏好的活动种类不同

Body paragraph 1

It is clear that althoughmoremales enjoyed leisure timecompared tofemales throughout the period, the proportion of malesfell remarkablyfrom 85% in 1996 to 62% in 2006.In contrast, the percentage of females who enjoyed leisure timemore than doubledto 61% in 2006,almost matching the figure formales.

思路要点：图1

- 三年中males>females，但males数据从1996年但85%显著下降到2006年到62%

- 对比而言，females数据上涨两倍多达到2006年到61%，几乎和males数据持平

Body paragraph 2

Regardingthe percentage of people spending their leisure time in various places, going to the beachwas the most popular activityfor both genders, with 30% of females and 25% of males opting to relax by the sea.In contrast, KTV wasmuch less favored, since only 15% of males and a mere 13% of females preferred to go there. Both gendersshared similar interests tomuseums, with the figure of roughly 19%. Pop centers and cinemasdemonstrated notable gender differencesin participation rates.Specifically, the former attracted 30% of males,twice the figure forfemales.However, cinemas were only chosen by 10% of males,significantly lower thanthe 25% of females who preferred this activity.

思路要点：图2(静态图)

- beach男女数据都最高（females占比30%，males占比25%）

- KTV男女数据都较低（males占比15%，females占比13%）

- Museums男女数据相似，大约为19%

- Pop center、cinema男女差距大

- Pop center：males占比30%，是females的2倍

- cinema：males占比10%，远低于females数据(25%)