支招小作文(216) I 动态柱组合英国不同音乐类型收入&从业人数对比

February 20, 2025

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The charts below give information about the UK music industry by sector, in three years 2013, 2014 and 2015.

分段方法：一图一段

开头段

The bar charts illustrate the income and employment trends in three sectors of the music industry (live music, music publishing, and recorded music) in the UK over a three-year period starting from 2013.

概述段

Overall, live music wasthe most profitable sectorand alsoemployed the largest number of staff,exhibiting the most notable fluctuationsin employee numbers over the given period.

思路要点：

- live music的income最高，employees人数也最多

- 只有live music的就业人员数量变化显著

Body paragraph 1

In terms of profits obtained by three sectors, 230 million pounds went to live music in 2013,after which there was a constant rise to£290 million in 2015.Conversely, recorded musicsaw a marginal decrease inits income,droppingfrom £170 million to £140 million in the same period. The income from music publishingstabilized atroughly £150 million prior to 2014,followed by a slight growth to£190 million in the final year.

思路要点：图1（收入对比）

- Live Music：2013年为£230 million→持续上升到2015年达到£290 million

- Recorded Music：从£170 million持续下降到£140 million

- Music Publishing：2014年之前平稳在大约£150 million→2015年小幅度上升到£190 million

Body paragraph 2

The figure for employee numbersexhibited a similar pattern.Specifically, the number of people employed in the live music sectormore than doubled to9,000 by 2015. The figure for employees in music publishingalsoincreased,but at a more moderate rate, reaching 2,900 by 2015.In comparison,there was a sharp decline inthe number of employees in recorded music to only 1,400 in 2015.

思路要点：图2(员工数量)

- 员工数量呈现类似规律

- Live Music：上涨了2倍多，2015年达到9,000

- Music Publishing：也呈现上升趋势，但幅度较小，2015年达到2,900

- Recorded Music：急剧下降，2015年达到1,400